Homecomings

[jay]

Tinny, scratchy voices
Miles rush by
What will the day find?
Places change.

Will it be my home?
Can I go back again?
New zoning permits?
Apartments next door?

Nerves jangle broken wheels.
I walk up
and look in her eyes
and I'm home.

Comments

[serenejournal.livejournal.com]

Awwwww.

[archway.livejournal.com]

~warm smile!~

[p3aches.livejournal.com]

I love it when you write poetry. It's wonderfully expressive. Genuine poetry warms me even when it is not for me. Hugs T

[who-is-she.livejournal.com]

"nerves jangle broken wheels"

lovely.

looking forward to reading more of your poetry,
:)

[dawnd.livejournal.com]

Very nice indeed. And very sweet. :^)